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Writing Craft Practice: Worldbuilding

15 Sep

Your story has to happen somewhere, and your characters are in that somewhere, so your world is a character in and of itself, living and breathing alongside the character’s journey and (potentially) pushing them into new problems and obstacles. Worldbuilding is symbolic.

Digital fantasy art of a figure standing amidst rocky pools, gazing at an enormous celestial body partly obscured by fluffy white clouds.

Think of worldbuilding as far more than technical – the culture, the clothing, the cuisine, the weather, etc. – or surface level, what we see.

But…what does this all mean?

Worlds should be an intentional design choice. If it’s raining, it’s raining to set the mood; if we’re in a hot, cramped apartment, that’s an intentional setting, perhaps meant to reflect the character’s mental state.

So, look at worldbuilding as symbolic.

Symbolic Worldbuilding creates value and visual clashes.  

The best stories use their world to create contrast, which reflects the conflicts between characters and their values. We can look at The Hobbit as an example.

(Yes, this is fantasy and, again, worldbuilding is for all genres, but consider this powerful, well-known example and then think about your favorite stories and how this applies).

The Shire reflects Bilbo’s values. Bilbo embodies comfort and reclusivity, staying away from trouble and preferring everything to be peaceful and quiet.

Symbolic worldbuilding: His home is small, small, low, hidden. The Shire is a place where the weather is peaceful, and there are always plentiful lands around him where no one will bother him.

The antagonist, Smaug, is the exact opposite: a tyrannical dragon who values power, treasure, and destruction. Hence, he lives in visual opposition to the Shire, on a tall, imposing, dangerous, and cold mountain.

Symbolic Worldbuilding: Two different sets of values translated into two visually different settings.  

Key Visual Moments

There will be key moments in a story where the author uses worldbuilding to enhance atmosphere and mimic, mirror, or mock your characters.

  1. A place that conveys the character’s weakness at the beginning of the story.
    1. An introvert at a house party, a business-crazy millionaire sitting in a humble family home, an adult bullied as a child returns to his childhood home as a substitute teacher.
  2. A place that highlights the character’s goal (The character having a desire to escape – while other times it might be somewhere, literal or metaphorical, that they’re trying to reach).
  3. A place that captures the antagonist’s world.
    1. It would’ve been a poor choice to have Dracula’s house be on a beach or for Scrooge to work at a carnival.  
  4. A character’s low point – when they hit rock bottom and all seems lost (to them), the world around them should be dismal, low, dark, cold, and symbolic of a sense of hopelessness.
    1. Alternative: Glimpse of paradise. Give the hero a moment to see what a happy life would look like before obstacles are thrown in their way, so they can’t have that life. Then the reader can see more of what the protagonist is fighting for.
  5. Pressure point – Returning from rock bottom, the hero is back in their fight, but pressure is mounting on them. Think corridors and tight spaces, and really amp up the sense of everything bad closing in. How about a dark and dingy motel room a partner is forced to stay in after their spouse found out they were cheating and kicked them out of the house?
  6. Final Battle – The stage of the final conflict with the antagonist. Make it dramatic, and somewhere that has meaning to the characters…
  7. Resolution – Things have reached a new equilibrium in the hero’s life. What does their new life look like? How does what they see, smell, hear, taste, and touch make them feel?
A stone bridge leads to the entrance of Eltz Castle, a medieval fortress rising out of a dense, low-lying fog under a dramatic, cloudy sky.

Adding in the Details

There are 4 key areas of worldbuilding:

  1. The man-made environment (towns, cities, markets, schools, etc.)
  2. The natural environment (seasons, weather, atmosphere, temperature, flora and fauna).
  3. Systems (culture, politics, social norms, customs, magic systems – if applicable – etc.)
  4. Tools and technology (clothing, tools or equipment, important objects)

Even if your story is set in the real world, you’ll want to build in the relevant details as if you were designing a movie set.

Best Practices & Self-Editing Checklist

Run through these thoughts while worldbuilding.

  • Does the environment my character is in make sense for their development and what they are trying to achieve? If not (and this could be the case. That’s okay), why not?
  • Does the environment show the reader the level of trouble or peace the character is in?
  • Replace the world your character is in now with the direct opposite. Would the scene still feel right? Would it hinder the reader’s understanding?

Prompts to Practice:

  1. A character who absolutely hates attention and loves quiet spaces is forced to attend a massive, chaotic family reunion. The event is held in a loud, cramped backyard during a heatwave. Start the story right when they arrive.
  2. A neat-freak 13-year-old keeps their bedroom organized to a T, but is sent to a babysitter’s house for the night. Typical, except that this new babysitter’s house is messy, chaotic, full of loud pets, and smells old. Write a scene that shows the messy visual details and how they clash with the teenager’s lifestyle as the teenager walks through the front door. Use the messy visual details to show the deep clash between the two characters’ lifestyles and values.
  3. A character has exactly five minutes to get to a life-changing job interview. They are in the building, but suddenly the old elevator they’re riding in stalls and stops between floors. Write a scene from this moment and how being in this small space triggers pressure on the character and forces them to grapple with the potential of their low point.

Suggested Books with Strong World Building

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Written by:
Sean Willey
Information and Digital Services Assistant

General Writing Craft Titles (To get inspired and immerse yourself, whether your pursuits are authorship or to better understand good storytelling.)

Book: Save the Cat! Writes a Novel by Jessica Brody

Book: Mastering the Process: From Idea to Novel by Elizabeth George

Book: On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft by Stephen King

Book: Bird by Bird: Some Instructions on Writing and Life by Anne Lamott

Book: A Long Game: Notes on Writing Fiction by Elizabeth McCracken

TV: The Great Courses Writing Great Fiction

Audiobook: The Writing Life by Annie Dillard

Audiobook: Structuring Your Novel: Essential Keys to Writing an Outstanding Story

Audiobook: The Anatomy of Genre by John Truby

Audiobook: The Business of Being a Writer by Jane Friedman

Audiobook: Writing Series from Sandy Marsh (multiple step-by-step titles through the writing process)

Audiobook: Writing Fiction: A Guide to the Narrative Craft

Writing Workshops and Program Options at the Hoboken Public Library

1. Write and Share: Prompts and Projects

Whether you’re drafting a novel, developing a short story, exploring a new idea, or simply hoping to practice your writing skills, this space offers the chance to put words on the page alongside fellow writers.

Prompts for each meetup are themed and sent to registrants the morning of, so that they can develop ideas and thoughts for the evening’s gathering. These prompts are optional for those looking for a creative spark. Writers are more than welcome to focus on their own projects, too. This is time set aside to help us all get closer to reaching our writing goals.

To join us or if you have questions, please email reference@hobokenlibrary.org.

2. Writers Group

Get input and constructive feedback on your writing project in a friendly and supportive environment! Meets once a month.

If you are working on your next project—whether it is a novel, short story, memoir or poetry—our Writers Group is a great place to get input and constructive feedback on your work! Our supportive group of fellow writers can help give you insights you need into shaping your work for self or traditional publication.

Email hplwriters@gmail.com for more information.

Waitlisted: What’s Behind Your Library Ebook Delay?

9 Jul

If you’ve placed a hold on a popular ebook or audiobook through Libby and watched the queue stretch out for weeks, you’re in good company. Digital borrowing at Hoboken Public Library has climbed steadily over the past several years, as you can see in the graph above, and for many of you it’s now the main way you read. The wait times that come with that are one of the most common questions we hear, so we wanted to walk through what’s actually going on behind the scenes.

Why does my ebook hold take so long?

A library’s digital collection works differently than the digital copy you buy on your own from a commercial retailer. When you buy an ebook for yourself, you typically keep it on your device indefinitely. When the library makes that same title available to customers, we license a digital copy under terms set by the publisher. Most current popular titles are licensed under “one user at a time” terms, much like a print copy. If the library has three licensed copies and forty-seven people on the hold list, the math works the same way it does for print. Customers move through the queue in the order they joined.

Here’s a concrete example. A recent bestseller like Yesteryear by Caro Claire Burke costs about $15 as a personal ebook purchase. The library’s license for the same title is around $55, and that license expires after two years. A bookstore can restock a popular title from a warehouse, but our digital collection works differently. Each additional copy comes as a separate license at the same per-copy price, and most expire on the same clock.

Why don’t you just license more copies?

We do, especially for high-demand titles. Hoboken Public Library’s digital materials budget has grown substantially over the past five years, and digital now accounts for more than half of what we spend on the collection. We watch hold ratios closely and add licenses where the queue justifies it.

Spending alone leaves the wait in place, though. A growing share of every library’s digital budget goes to buying additional copies of titles that are already in the collection, just to bring down hold lists on popular books. Every license expires on the publisher’s clock, so that spending maintains access for a defined period rather than building a permanent collection. If we doubled the digital budget tomorrow, you’d see shorter waits in the near term and the same waits returning as licenses expired and had to be renewed. It’s a different math than the one that governs print, where a book bought once can stay on the shelf for as long as it’s useful to the community.

Are there different ways to license the same book?

Yes, and the landscape has been shifting in a way worth knowing about. For some titles, the platform now offers more than one type of license for the same book, and the choice we make shapes what the wait looks like.

Take Yesteryear by Caro Claire Burke again. Hoboken’s eBCCLS digital collection runs through BCCLS, the 78-library consortium we belong to, so the copies and holds we’re about to describe are shared across the region. As of July 8, 226 BCCLS copies of Yesteryear are checked out and 1,309 customers are waiting. That’s roughly six customers per copy, with a wait list of at least five months. For that title, the consortium can license a one-year copy at $27.50, a two-year copy at $55, or pay roughly $5.50 each time any customer checks out the title (“cost per circ”), with every customer able to borrow it immediately. The first two options are “one user at a time” licenses, which is what creates the hold list in the first place. The third lets any number of customers borrow the same title at the same moment, which is what gives every customer instant access. The trade is that our cost grows with every checkout, scaling directly with use. With 1,309 customers already waiting and demand likely to continue, the third option would quickly run to several thousand dollars on a single title before the demand even settles.

We make these calls title by title, weighing how long the demand is likely to last, how many copies we’d need, and what we can sustain across the rest of the collection. The right answer varies by title. A title with a sharp spike of interest that fades in three months calls for a different bet than a title with steady demand over years.

Here is how the math breaks down for a single copy of a bestseller like Yesteryear:

FormatCost to ConsumerCost to the LibraryExpiration Terms
Personal eBook~$15NAYours indefinitely
Library eBook (1-Yr License)NA$27.50Expires after one year.  
Library eBook (2-Yr License)NA$55.00Expires after two years.  
Cost Per CircNA~$5.50Two weeks for eBCCLS

Why are some books in a series available but not others?

This one surprises customers more than almost any other. You’ll see books one through five of a series in our digital collection and books six through ten missing entirely. The most common reason is that publishers decide title by title which works to license to libraries and on what terms. Some titles release through commercial retailers only. Others appear in our catalog for a period and then get pulled when an agreement ends. The decision sits with the publisher.

When this happens, we’ll often add the print copy or look for an audiobook edition if the licensing terms differ across formats. If you spot a gap in a series you’re reading, let us know. Sometimes a title becomes available on different terms later, and your interest helps us catch the change.

Is this how it works at every library?

It’s how it works at every U.S. public library that licenses digital content from the major trade publishers, which is essentially all of them. The licensing terms are set by publishers and implemented through digital distribution platforms. Libraries accept the terms as offered – there is no room for negotiation. Each library chooses how many licenses to acquire and which titles to prioritize, but the duration, the one-user-at-a-time format, and the renewal cycle for each title are set by its publisher. Libraries around the country are navigating the same conditions and answering the same customer questions.

Aren’t digital files different? Why does a license “expire”?

A digital file holds up indefinitely, while a print book wears with use. The expiration is a licensing term applied to the file. Publishers and platforms have modeled digital library licensing on print circulation, where physical copies wear down over time and eventually need to be replaced. The licensing terms create a similar replacement cycle on a defined schedule.

The result is that demand for specific titles, the new bestseller, the book club pick, the prize winner, is highly concentrated, while the supply available to libraries is shaped by terms publishers set. And every title is its own work with its own audience. If you want this title, no other title will quite do.

Be a good digital neighbor: ways to find books faster

A few things help, and most of them help your neighbors too.

  • Before taking up a spot in the hold line or checking out an ebook, click “Read Sample” or “Listen to Sample” directly beneath the hold link. Taking a quick 5-minute test drive ensures you actually like the author’s style before committing to the hold list. If it is not a fit right now, you can just tag it for later.
  • Return early when you can. Checkouts return automatically at the end of the loan, but finishing early and returning the title moves the next customer forward. On very popular titles, roughly a third of licensed copies are often sitting checked out on someone’s device, waiting for that customer to start reading. A quick return when you finish makes a real difference.
  • Schedule delivery on holds. If a hold becomes available before you’re ready to read it, you can have Libby deliver it later while keeping your place in line. That keeps the copy moving to the next reader instead of pausing on your shelf.
  • Try the other format. Hold queues for the ebook and digital audiobook editions of the same title can be very different. The print copy may also be on the shelf when the digital copies are checked out.
  • Use the Notify Me tag in Libby for titles you’d like to see in our collection. Those tags tell us what to consider adding, and we look at them regularly to purchase high demand titles.
  • If you find a book you want to read eventually (but not right this second) don’t place a hold. Cluttering the hold queue blocks people who are ready to read today. Use Tags (see image below)  instead to build a future reading wishlist. you can create custom tags based on your mood (“Comfort Reads”), specific genres, or family members (like “Books for my son”).

Anything else worth knowing?

A few facts about the broader picture, if you’re curious.

Digital reading from public libraries has grown faster than any other format. Public libraries worldwide checked out more than 737 million digital titles in 2025, a nine percent increase over the year before.

A small number of large trade publishers account for most of the high-demand titles people are placing holds on, and they license to libraries on similar terms. Some smaller and independent publishers offer different licensing models, including longer-duration or simultaneous-use licenses, which is part of why those titles often have shorter waits.

Who can I talk to about a specific hold or title?

Reach out to us. We’re happy to walk through what’s in the queue, suggest something similar that’s available sooner, or take a request to add a title to our collection. Email us at info@hobokenlibrary.org or stop by the second floor information desks.

Thanks for reading with us.

Posted by:
Aimee Harris
Information and Digital Services Manager